Unedited version of my narrative.

This is the first draft of my story. It is an unedited version. 

It’s 6:00 o'clock in the morning and Mr Robbins is wide awake watering and feeding his plants and animals. He owns a farm. While Mrs Robbins is overseas in Europe at her new job. It has been a week since she left. Mr Robbins care’s a lot for his animals that’s why he spends from 6:00 o'clock in the morning till 8:00 at night. That is 14 hours outside. He does that everyday.

One day while picking eggs from the chicken he heard a car stop. He thought it was his brother John. His brother John visited last week with his 4 children 2 girls and 2 boys. The two girls are twins. One name Molly and the other one named polly. The brothers are Sam and Carl. But by his surprise it was the Landlord . His name was Mr Wilson. Mr wilson gave him a note and drove off. He sat down and r.ad it. It said Dear Mr Robbins I am very sorry to say that you have to leave all your crops and animals and move to another place because someone has fully bought the farm and you have only paid half the amount. If you think you can pay the rest in 2 weeks you can keep your farm. Kind regards : Mr Wilson.



He was a very sad man he groaned for about 5 minutes until he heard a ring ring it was his wife calling. He got his cellphone out of his pocket and answered “hello Mr Robbins speaking” Hello it’s me your wife Jenny Im just calling to hear what’s going on”. So George who was Mr Robbins told Jenny that the Landlord will have to give the farm to another family if they can't pay the rest of the farm in 2 weeks . So Jenny said “Good news I have made 700 dollars and I am coming back tomorrow I will pay it to the landlord when I come and we can have our farm and home” “Thank you so much Jenny” replied George.



The next day later George got into his car and drove to the airport. He was so happy. It took him 20 minutes to get to the airport. When he arrived he ran all the way to give his wife a hug. Jenny was surprised to see him so happy. She showed him the 700 dollars and went straight to the landlord and paid it off. So they went home joyful and got to keep 400 dollars because that was the left over and enjoyed a happy life with their animals.