Thursday, 31 October 2013

My Edited Version of A Picture of a PLane turns into a story








Early in the morning the Lorrins family are taking the suitcases in the boot. They are heading for the airport. They are leaving to Canada to visit some family members the haven’t seen for almost 3 years. The plane leaves at 6:00 o clock so they better hurry. Mrs Lorrins is still trying to wake up Samantha. She is 8 years old and always loves to sleep in. After 3 minutes she has awaken by a rummm. I asked mum what was that noise she replied back “sweetheart it’s only dad turning on the car” I replied back by saying why ? mum said “Remember we are leaving to Canada to visit Auntie and Uncle.

So then Samantha brushed her teeth,brushed her hair and put on the clothes that her mum left on the bed and ran straight into the back seat of the car. Dad was surprised to see her full with energy. Last time when they were heading for England she was dragging herself to the car and even slept in there and they had to wake her up at the carpark of the airport. That took 7 minutes to do that. So they drove to the airport and they played Samantha’s favorite song. It is you can count on me by Bruno Mars. Arriving at the airport they got there suitcases and ran to the check in point and checked in.

When finishing doing that they ran to the place where you show your passport and other details and they went. They asked the assistant which plane is heading to Canada the lady said the plane on the north side. But by mistaken she meant the east side but she was too late. They already have taken their first step into the plane . That plane was heading for Hawaii.



So the engine of the plane began and they were flying now they have reached up way into the sky. The slept for 7-9 hours and Karen who is Mrs Lorrins looks outside the window and see’s a beach. She asked the pilot where are they and he said “Mamm this plane goes to Hawaii and we are in Hawaii. “Oh no she says the assistant said this plane goes to Canada we are suppose to be in Canada” The Pilot said “I'm very sorry but I got to fill this plane with gas and that gas is suppose to be me going back to Australia. The next flight to Australia will be not after 5 days so you will have to stay here” Ok replied Karen.

She awoke her husband and told him all about what happened but Samantha was actually happy. She would rather be in a hot sunny place then be in the second version of Antarctica. So they went to a motel called the Coconut Motel. Samantha laughed when she heard the name of the motel. There room was 197. Samantha’s parent’s start to settled in but Samantha took her swimming togs and ran to the beach. It was a good thing that the view outside there window was the area Samantha was swimming in.

She told her Parents to come and have a swim and they did. So they made plans of what they would do. For the rest of the 4 days it felt like they were in heaven. The loved on the last day they got a free massage and Samantha got Ice cream. The actually enjoy Hawaii and after 5 days in Hawaii Mr Lorrins said “It wasn't a bad holiday after all” and soon they headed back to Australia to catch the next flight to Canada witch Samantha calls 2 version of Antarctica.




                           

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