Once a upon a time there was a girl named Sally. She lived with her father and 2 sisters. Her mother died in a car accident 14 years ago when sally was One years old. Very sad news. Sally was going to turn sixteen tommorow. She was very excited and couldn’t wait what her dad had in mind for a present.
When her dad was out shopping with her sisters she thought of the present that he may give her. She thought it might be a new cellphone,trip to the fun park or even travel to Australia !!! The night before when everyone was asleep Sally had a dream.
Her dream was that at her party she was dancing but without her mum. Every time it was sally’s birthday her and her mum will dance together. Then she awoke quickly. She remembered when she was young every time she would dance with her mother.
It was her birthday. All her friends came and gave her presents. That remided her the best present she ever wanted was to visit her mum at the cematery. She told her dad and he said he forgot to fill the car. She felt very sad and tears started to drop. She ran to her room . All she could think of was her mum. Sally tried to figure every way to get to her mum.
She took the bus. Her uncle was a bus driver and she got to go wherever she wanted to go . She ran to her mum’s grave and said I love you mum. She had the best birthday ever !!!!
Hey Marilyn,
ReplyDeleteHow is your day well mune is awsome because you have thriled me from sallys birthday it was amazing and it made perfect sence but you just need to know where your sentences goes and where the full stop goes but great have a wonderful day you are the WOOOOO - MAN you ROCK.