My group performance.

Here is the group I performed in The Band !!!.



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My camp story.

Have you camped with your friends outside away from home well the year 5 and 6 students did. We had been having fun with the activites that the teachers have prepared for us. Some of the games are get lost witch is similar to the programe you see on tv the Amazing race. My favourite activity is kayaking. I kayaked with my buddy Jenifer  very far from shore. I have never been kayaking before. Now I love it.

I really love to camp because you camp with friends and have fun activites with your friends. I am in a group called the band with a teacher called Mr Sommerville. I also love cooking. We cooked with Mrs Fester. It was really fun. We only cooked with the girls in our team. We baked Biscuts witch was for afternoon tea It was delicous.

It was a great oppurtunite to be at camp with my friends. i really enjoy this experince.

My Nga Manawa.

My Edited Version.

It was an ordinary day like usual were the birds would sing in the trees and everyone is quite. But then it became strange. I heard my neighbour say I can’t find my colourful blanket,my precious children and my flat screen televison.  I was suprised when she started to shout, everything became loud, everybody went crazy and I became scared.So I called my friend Lucy who was having a vacation in Hawwai. She” said calm down I will call the magican people”. I was so angry I hanged up.

I was really scared and shocked.My feeling wasn’t in a good mode so I went back over to my house and then.AAAAAH my house is gone everything is gone. I lost my mind. Then again my neighbour started screaming. What happened now. Really your house dissapeared .
A day like this will be werst day of my life.

15 hours later a man came out of nowhere he said would you like back your things and then we replied sort of kind of YES!!!. He said the three magic words abbra kadabra magic. They came back. But we had heeps of questions to ask. But he suddenly dissapeared  like a magican.

My neighbour Sally was full of joy and then our neighbourhood was happy again. So then after 15 minutes  I was still terrified so i took a vacation with lucy But then...

My test work

This what I did in 40 minutes from my test.But look out you might find my edited work



It was an ordinary day like usual were the birds would sing in the trees and everyone is quite. But
then it became strange. I heard my neighbour say I can’t find my colourful blanket,my precious children and my flat screen televison. So I came over to see if they really dissapeared. AHH they
dissapeared. I was really scared and shocked.My feeling wasn’t in a good mode so I went back over to my house and then.AAAAAH my house is gone everything is gone. I lost my mind. Then again my neighbour started screaming. What happened now. Really your house dissapeared .
A day like this will be werst day of my life. 15 hours later a man came out of nowhere he said
would you like back your things and then we replied sort of kind of YES!!!. He said the three magic words abbra kadabra magic. They came back. But we had heeps of questions to ask.
He said the magic man could not be questioned. Guess what it was all a dream!!! Maybe or
not.